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[求批改] 托福写作——[独立][真题]感谢老师!马上就要考了

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Disagree or agree: Getting advice from older friends is morevaluable than from the friends of the same age as yours.

From failures in tests to the financialdebt of businessmen, challenges and problems are everywhere in our life. Sometimes these difficulties are unsolvable by ourselves, so we need suggestions from others. However, whether the advice from older people or from friends of the same age is more benefial to our life has been discussed fordecades. For me, I believe that we should seek for help from friends and relatives older than us as the solutions suggested by them are more valuable.

The first reason for my inclination is that, in most cases, the longer individuals live, the more experience about life and the world they precure. This is due to the more opportunities the older people have for overcoming challegnes. Experience can play significant role in givng out suggestions. If people have experienced the same problem othersare consulting them about, they may think of advice that is more related to the reality as they know the exact details of the challenge and have a deep understanding of what this person can do to overcome it. For example, freshmenin college are more possible to give helpful advice to high school students during application for universitites since they have knowledge of each process of application and the difficulties applicantsare going to have. However, it is impossible to expect high school students to suggest something detailed and valuable to their classmates for the same ignorance they have for the later application. Simply out, the help from elder family members and friends has more benefits for the sake of the valuable experience these people have.

Secondly,methods to overcome difficulties can be given from an unexpected new point of view from a person who is older since they are more mature. Maturity often differs from age to age: the teenagers and the adults have totally distinct ways of viewing the world and life, and thus, to be more specific , the way of seeing problems and findng solutions. It can be predicted that individuals from the same age can have same way of viewing challengs, but,for the elder, it is different. A unique viewpoint that younger people may have never imagined is uauslly noticed by the elder. Therefore, suggestions from a new point of viewis provided, extending the options of solutions people can take and easing their situations. In a word, advice from the more matured can help more for the diverse standpoint they offer.

Admittdly, the closer relationship between individuals of the same age can be of some importance in giving advice. The intimacy is somewhat a factor people consider when seek for their counselors so that they are more comfortable with it. Nevertheless, the process of finding solutions are not so important compared to the solutions themselves. Though theprocess seems more acceptable since some people will not feel embarrassed, the results are not helpful because people of the same age may come up with same measures to the problem due to their similar experience and maturality, making the process a waste of time.

To conclude, the suggestions from people older should be considerd more for the elder’s experience and different standpoints.

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